[Skywars] cryingazureeyes's Map Submission

[cryingazureeyes]

Creator's Minecraft Username:

cryingazureeyes​

Game-Mode:

Skywars​

Graphical Footage:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Yr1EmdhQcg
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Download Link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LH62RACTG11Tz1tK6MvIxhfADg3qHbpw/view?usp=sharing

 

[cryingazureeyes]

The stairs to access to the chest at the bottom are too small imo.
Also, the middle isn't enough flat I think

Have fun making your map!

https://imgur.com/a/Wy7Rz75

View: https://imgur.com/a/Wy7Rz75

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GpkbhoAVw2Q

Can you give me another advice how to make this map look cool?

 

[Alduin]

https://imgur.com/a/Wy7Rz75

View: https://imgur.com/a/Wy7Rz75

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GpkbhoAVw2Q

Can you give me another advice how to make this map look cool?

Islands might need different blocks/stones and you need to rework the middle.

 

[cryingazureeyes]

Islands might need different blocks/stones and you need to rework the middle.

I am planning to add some sandstone in islands but now I want to hear all suggestions. By the way, I think that middle island with dragon looks more beautiful than middle island with endermen

 

[MiltonNJ05]

I like the concept a lot, but as others have said, it is quite bland, and could use more detail. Maybe find a way to incorporate a couple new colors somehow to balance out with the black and pale yellow. This has good potential though.

 

[FuzniX]

It looks very good. Ignore what they said above because they seem to be jealous of your building skills.

I already said that I loved the idea but it needs more work to be a very good

https://imgur.com/a/Wy7Rz75

View: https://imgur.com/a/Wy7Rz75

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GpkbhoAVw2Q

Can you give me another advice how to make this map look cool?

That's good, I think you should add more different blocks, because there is too much endstone on the map

 

[progamezia]

I tried to remake this map and follow your advice.

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvfOnSGizEg

i honestly dont like the the circle shape of the islands,it just feels a bit boring too,like theres just the ores,the chests and the endstone on the player islands,

 

[Silent_MC]

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Although, I believe that this map has a lot of potential. I really like the idea of an end city map and it is personally something that I have never seen on other servers, I feel like this map that you created was a little rushed through but I love the ideas of the ender dragon in the middle island, and the obsidian pillars throughout the map.

Suggestions:
-I suggest that you take a little more time and design islands for the players to start out in, once you get a good prototype try to experiment and see what could make it better and use mods to make sure they're 100% accurate for every island.
-I feel like you could maybe put in some different characteristics of the end into the map, for example you could have an enderman build somewhere (secondary islands maybe?) and possibly the ender dragon tomb just to name some ideas.

Good luck if you do decide to revamp this map.

 

[cryingazureeyes]

Hey, I tried to revamp starter island and made this prototype. What do you think about it? What details should I add?

https://imgur.com/a/XyXbbUP

View: https://imgur.com/a/XyXbbUP

 

[Aevicene]

Hey, I tried to revamp starter island and made this prototype. What do you think about it? What details should I add?

https://imgur.com/a/XyXbbUP

View: https://imgur.com/a/XyXbbUP

Yep it's starting out to be better
I suggest using slabs also usemore blocks instead of sticking to 1-2
AS I said players prefer aesthetic maps so i would suggest working on that too


Keep up the good work mate

 

[cryingazureeyes]

Yep it's starting out to be better
I suggest using slabs also usemore blocks instead of sticking to 1-2
AS I said players prefer aesthetic maps so i would suggest working on that too


Keep up the good work mate

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3Z2pd3AHbs

Added a bit of quartz in map and added more sandstone in island. I guess, I have to rework second islands