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Hello. Thanks for the map submission.
So far just by watching the video there are a few things I wanted to point out.
First off your islands do not look very natural, you can see the grass on the base island hangs off and creates an unnatural feel.
The bottom of your islands are also not properly smoothed. There are lots of straight lines that don’t look normal.
Tall grass may impact gameplay so I wouldn’t add that.
The “pond” at the diamond gen is a literal triangle.
You may not add signs or easter eggs to your map either.
Your generators are plain too, just stone slabs.
You have wood logs facing the wrong direction
Your “frog” is also looking mega weird.
That mosquito is 3 floating blocks?
Overall your map does need some intermediate changes meaning I do not see it ready to be played on Jartex. Still thanks for taking time to create a map and hopefully you can learn some more stuff from it. This does not mean your map will be denied, it’s just my observations.
Sincerely,
Yanique1
Team minigames