Menu

Learn how to start playing on JartexNetwork in just 60 seconds!
Play Now
Learn how to join our server
and start playing in 60 seconds
Play Now
CLICK TO JOIN JOIN OUR DISCORD
0
0

 [BedWars] muaazbin's Map Submission

muaazbin

Active Member
Joined
April 17, 2020
Messages
69
Points
26

Yuu

Known Member
Known Member
Donator
Joined
July 31, 2020
Messages
2,312
Points
224
Age
19
IGN
UltraFartKnocker
Other than the diamond gens being really inaccessable and the frog looking disgusting this is a 10/10 if you made this as your first map, kudos!
 

starpredetor

Helper
Staff member
Helper
Great Reporter
Donator
Team Reports
Joined
February 14, 2021
Messages
789
Points
114
IGN
starpredetor
This map looks fun would be amazing to see a 4v4v4v4 version of this +1 tho good job
 

Yanique1

Sr.Mod
Staff member
Sr.Mod
Great Reporter
Donator
Team Appeals
Team Applications
Team Events
Team Mentorship
Team Reports
Team Screenshare
Joined
May 5, 2020
Messages
5,543
Points
230
Age
17
(pasted reply from youtube)

Hello. Thanks for the map submission.

So far just by watching the video there are a few things I wanted to point out.

First off your islands do not look very natural, you can see the grass on the base island hangs off and creates an unnatural feel.

The bottom of your islands are also not properly smoothed. There are lots of straight lines that don’t look normal.

Tall grass may impact gameplay so I wouldn’t add that.

The “pond” at the diamond gen is a literal triangle.

You may not add signs or easter eggs to your map either.

Your generators are plain too, just stone slabs.

You have wood logs facing the wrong direction

Your “frog” is also looking mega weird.

That mosquito is 3 floating blocks?

Overall your map does need some intermediate changes meaning I do not see it ready to be played on Jartex. Still thanks for taking time to create a map and hopefully you can learn some more stuff from it. This does not mean your map will be denied, it’s just my observations.

Sincerely,
Yanique1
Team minigames
 
AUTHOR
AUTHOR
muaazbin

muaazbin

Active Member
Joined
April 17, 2020
Messages
69
Points
26
Other than the diamond gens being really inaccessable and the frog looking disgusting this is a 10/10 if you made this as your first map, kudos!
Thanks for your opinion I will try make my map better in my next map :)
 
AUTHOR
AUTHOR
muaazbin

muaazbin

Active Member
Joined
April 17, 2020
Messages
69
Points
26
This map looks fun would be amazing to see a 4v4v4v4 version of this +1 tho good job
Thanks very much for your opinion but I still don't think this good enough for jartex there Missing some details I have fix that then it might get accepted
 

Yuu

Known Member
Known Member
Donator
Joined
July 31, 2020
Messages
2,312
Points
224
Age
19
IGN
UltraFartKnocker
Thanks for your opinion I will try make my map better in my next map :)
Why next map? Take yanique's advice and try to make this one flawless. Its a good looking map
 
AUTHOR
AUTHOR
muaazbin

muaazbin

Active Member
Joined
April 17, 2020
Messages
69
Points
26
(pasted reply from youtube)

Hello. Thanks for the map submission.

So far just by watching the video there are a few things I wanted to point out.

First off your islands do not look very natural, you can see the grass on the base island hangs off and creates an unnatural feel.

The bottom of your islands are also not properly smoothed. There are lots of straight lines that don’t look normal.

Tall grass may impact gameplay so I wouldn’t add that.

The “pond” at the diamond gen is a literal triangle.

You may not add signs or easter eggs to your map either.


Your generators are plain too, just stone slabs.

You have wood logs facing the wrong direction

Your “frog” is also looking mega weird.

That mosquito is 3 floating blocks?

Overall your map does need some intermediate changes meaning I do not see it ready to be played on Jartex. Still thanks for taking time to create a map and hopefully you can learn some more stuff from it. This does not mean your map will be denied, it’s just my observations.

Sincerely,
Yanique1
Team minigames

Muaazbin

1 hour ago
I will make some changes immediately if it's still not enough Iam working on a different map. Note: it's my first time using world Edit or building something matter of the fact ik it have a lot of mistakes I will try to not do the mistake again in my next map I hope you will like the next map
Show less
 
Top